Sunday, April 21, 2013

Response: Crossing the Wire by Will Hobbs


I have mixed feelings about this book. I don't think Crossing the Wire has enough emotional intensity. Perhaps my expectations are too high from reading Sold. Nevertheless, the book was an easy read and enjoyable read. I've done very little traveling and have lived in the same house for most of my life. So I'm trying to comprehend leaving home and traveling to a new dangerous country. There is a coming-of-age theme to this book because Victor has to grow up very quickly. At the age of fifteen, Victor is risking his life for a slim chance of earning a living for his family. When I was fifteen I was worried about passing driver's ed. Reading this story is somewhat humbling and makes me glad that I live in a country where I'm free to travel from state to state and not worry about starvation. That being said, I recall Victor's injury from jumping off the train and I noticed the hospital treated him free of charge. I think many foreign countries as well as some of our own citizens create this utopist image of America. And while reading the story I wondered how Victor would live in America. He would still be an outcast. The American immigration and border policies are inefficient. This story reinforced my political stance on the immigration problem. I want America to be secure but I don't want to dehumanize anyone. The border patrol spends all this time rounding up people like Victor instead of real threats. For the most part, the travelers Victor met were friendly and aided in his journey. Although, he did get mixed up with some smugglers. I was expecting Victor to get shot or maybe one of his friends would die but the author kept things on the lighter side. I laughed at one particular reference about how the Americans would have a better chance of finding Bin Laden than the drug mules. I checked the publication date and saw 2006. I liked how Victor is portrayed as just an average kid struggling to control fear and his responsibilities. He is an honest, hard-working guy that just wants to feed his family. It's hard to find a flaw on him. It reminded me of The Outsiders. Kids are forced to take on more responsibilities and drama than they should. And that's just wrong regardless of where they are from.  

1 comment:


  1. Try to stay brave even when things get in the way
    How I got that theme from Victor was that the police on the bus got in the way, by telling him to get off because he didn’t have any of the documents, he still was brave, but he was getting less confident. In this theme, I don’t think that it really helped my think of this theme. The plot was a big factor in my decision for the plot because Victor and his mom had to make this big decision, and Victor had to stay brave, even though some things got in his way.

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